Revise cloud-controller-manager documentation

content/en/docs/tasks/administer-cluster/running-cloud-controller.md

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-title: Kubernetes Cloud Controller Manager
+title: Cloud Controller Manager Administration
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-Kubernetes v1.6 introduced a new binary called `cloud-controller-manager`. `cloud-controller-manager` is a daemon that embeds cloud-specific control loops. These cloud-specific control loops were originally in the `kube-controller-manager`. Since cloud providers develop and release at a different pace compared to the Kubernetes project, abstracting the provider-specific code to the `cloud-controller-manager` binary allows cloud vendors to evolve independently from the core Kubernetes code.
+Since cloud providers develop and release at a different pace compared to the Kubernetes project, abstracting the provider-specific code to the {{< glossary_tooltip text="`cloud-controller-manager`" term_id="cloud-controller-manager" >}} binary allows cloud vendors to evolve independently from the core Kubernetes code.
 
-The `cloud-controller-manager` can be linked to any cloud provider that satisfies [cloudprovider.Interface](https://github.com/kubernetes/cloud-provider/blob/master/cloud.go). For backwards compatibility, the [cloud-controller-manager](https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/tree/master/cmd/cloud-controller-manager) provided in the core Kubernetes project uses the same cloud libraries as `kube-controller-manager`. Cloud providers already supported in Kubernetes core are expected to use the in-tree cloud-controller-manager to transition out of Kubernetes core. In future Kubernetes releases, all cloud controller managers will be developed outside of the core Kubernetes project managed by sig leads or cloud vendors.
+The `cloud-controller-manager` can be linked to any cloud provider that satisfies [cloudprovider.Interface](https://github.com/kubernetes/cloud-provider/blob/master/cloud.go). For backwards compatibility, the [cloud-controller-manager](https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/tree/master/cmd/cloud-controller-manager) provided in the core Kubernetes project uses the same cloud libraries as `kube-controller-manager`. Cloud providers already supported in Kubernetes core are expected to use the in-tree cloud-controller-manager to transition out of Kubernetes core.
 
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 * cloud information about nodes in the cluster will no longer be retrieved using local metadata, but instead all API calls to retrieve node information will go through cloud controller manager. This may mean you can restrict access to your cloud API on the kubelets for better security. For larger clusters you may want to consider if cloud controller manager will hit rate limits since it is now responsible for almost all API calls to your cloud from within the cluster.
 
 
-As of v1.8, cloud controller manager can implement:
+The cloud controller manager can implement:
 
-* node controller - responsible for updating kubernetes nodes using cloud APIs and deleting kubernetes nodes that were deleted on your cloud.
-* service controller - responsible for loadbalancers on your cloud against services of type LoadBalancer.
-* route controller - responsible for setting up network routes on your cloud
+* Node controller - responsible for updating kubernetes nodes using cloud APIs and deleting kubernetes nodes that were deleted on your cloud.
+* Service controller - responsible for loadbalancers on your cloud against services of type LoadBalancer.
+* Route controller - responsible for setting up network routes on your cloud
 * any other features you would like to implement if you are running an out-of-tree provider.
 
 
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 If you are using a cloud that is currently supported in Kubernetes core and would like to adopt cloud controller manager, see the [cloud controller manager in kubernetes core](https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/tree/master/cmd/cloud-controller-manager).
 
-For cloud controller managers not in Kubernetes core, you can find the respective projects in repos maintained by cloud vendors or sig leads.
+For cloud controller managers not in Kubernetes core, you can find the respective projects in repositories maintained by cloud vendors or by SIGs.
 
-* [DigitalOcean](https://github.com/digitalocean/digitalocean-cloud-controller-manager)
-* [keepalived](https://github.com/munnerz/keepalived-cloud-provider)
-* [Oracle Cloud Infrastructure](https://github.com/oracle/oci-cloud-controller-manager)
-* [Rancher](https://github.com/rancher/rancher-cloud-controller-manager)
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-For providers already in Kubernetes core, you can run the in-tree cloud controller manager as a Daemonset in your cluster, use the following as a guideline:
+For providers already in Kubernetes core, you can run the in-tree cloud controller manager as a DaemonSet in your cluster, use the following as a guideline:
 
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 ### Scalability
 
-In the previous architecture for cloud providers, we relied on kubelets using a local metadata service to retrieve node information about itself. With this new architecture, we now fully rely on the cloud controller managers to retrieve information for all nodes. For very large clusters, you should consider possible bottle necks such as resource requirements and API rate limiting.
+The cloud-controller-manager queries your cloud provider's APIs to retrieve information for all nodes. For very large clusters, consider possible bottlenecks such as resource requirements and API rate limiting.
 
 ### Chicken and Egg
 
 The goal of the cloud controller manager project is to decouple development of cloud features from the core Kubernetes project. Unfortunately, many aspects of the Kubernetes project has assumptions that cloud provider features are tightly integrated into the project. As a result, adopting this new architecture can create several situations where a request is being made for information from a cloud provider, but the cloud controller manager may not be able to return that information without the original request being complete.
 
-A good example of this is the TLS bootstrapping feature in the Kubelet. Currently, TLS bootstrapping assumes that the Kubelet has the ability to ask the cloud provider (or a local metadata service) for all its address types (private, public, etc) but cloud controller manager cannot set a node's address types without being initialized in the first place which requires that the kubelet has TLS certificates to communicate with the apiserver.
+A good example of this is the TLS bootstrapping feature in the Kubelet. TLS bootstrapping assumes that the Kubelet has the ability to ask the cloud provider (or a local metadata service) for all its address types (private, public, etc) but cloud controller manager cannot set a node's address types without being initialized in the first place which requires that the kubelet has TLS certificates to communicate with the apiserver.
 
 As this initiative evolves, changes will be made to address these issues in upcoming releases.
 
-## Developing your own Cloud Controller Manager
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-To build and develop your own cloud controller manager, read the [Developing Cloud Controller Manager](/docs/tasks/administer-cluster/developing-cloud-controller-manager.md) doc.
+To build and develop your own cloud controller manager, read [Developing Cloud Controller Manager](/docs/tasks/administer-cluster/developing-cloud-controller-manager/).
 
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